Inspired to poetry by Genie in the House? Send them in to us and we'll put them up here!!
GG's remberence will of Genie in the house.
Genie in the house was a comedy of fun
Where lots of stupid and wise things were done,
like singing fishes and dancing shoes
and in no time like the futer with hairband blues
Adil was a cute and smart guy
with magical powers and carpets that fly
Sophie was the brains and hates to take part
in any acting and shes so shy she cant
As Emma says shes not the brightest of all
But is very pretty and loves clothes and the mall
Then theres Phillip a good parent and dad
but he cant cope with a genie to,Adil drives him mad,
Then theres Caroline who is very nosy
she always simpers up to Phillip,who thinks shes warm and cosy
and then Phillips boss,Max,who just wants money
and Im telling you hes sourer than honey
Now that was my will of Genie in the house
when I die itll remain in my mind.
GG (Remember Im geniegirl (Megan) really!) theres another geniegirl - age 9
Fantastic! Great descriptions of all the characters! And in rhyme too!!!
Adil, Adil
What happened now?
I wished Dad was a cowboy,
And now he's a cow!!
Adil, Adil,
What did you do?
I wished Dad was a cowboy
But now he goes MOO!
Adil Adil
Unwish this wish!
Oh no, what's happened now?
I think Dad's a FISH!
Alice
Poor Dad! I imagine he's a little confused now!
Gemini and Scorpio Adil sisters
They love to do pranks,there little tricksters
They both have blue eyes and long red hair
Secrets and friend ship with eachother they share
They wear dresses like Duma except there blue
and they wear veils like brides and brown curved shoes
Gemini had glasses and is braiy like Sophie
But Scorpios competive and has loads of Trophies
Now please you these in the cast
but still keep the old ones,there not old past!
geniegirl - age 9
Fantastic! Well done!!
Emma's Ring Ring Ring Ring
You got no comments on your bebo page
None, Zero, Zilch, Zip
An old lady comes to pay her wage
Emma comes up with a new move, a flip!
Emma climbed up and fell down a ladder
There was a footballer named B Mcfadda
Who that man had no price to pay
Even though he had a lucky day
It soon turned out Billy was a spy
Adil searched his oat-meal
Up and down, very high
and soon he wobbled a steering wheel:)
Emma kept touching her ear-ring
She kept hearing this terrible thing
A tarantula came, her name was sting
She hit it with spatula, that's a ting
Jak - age 10
Ha ha ha! Funny!!
Kings Kross Kress Krass
One who loves and one who hates
the power of terror that never waits
for it's turn to come and fight
until that plant saw a blinding light
until the power
It's a genie called Adil
who fell through the hour
until he got oatmeal
It's not a very useful time
to come along
and make a rhyme
which never falls for a loud terror
The bong it heared made it cool
Oh for Adil we got a PS3
He's a genie from a lamp...
and who is he?
When they found him in the damp
They never knew what happened
and he said 'Hello Kiddies!'
Until that day he called Emma sexy
Ouch! my dumb ruler! it broke...
it's flexy so when I came from a door
I heared a girl counting up to four
Until the house burnt in smoke
Oh! no this terrible bloke is soaken
who's blonde, he's blonde and blonde
He went on a train 'heres my token!'
He called himself...
Mr James Bond
Jak - age 10
Let me see... "I Love Television" studios, Kings Cross. "Day of the Triffids"? "Casino Royale"?. In verses 3, 4 and 5, I have absolutely no idea what they are talking about! Again, maybe it would be best to not have them in there...
Cute and light i think you agree
that Adil is the best genie on Earth
there is no prize for those beutifull eyes
and nothing here is more worth!
Theres more to life than prettiness
which Adil has got
but theres anotherthing important
which is a HUGE big heart!
geniegirl - age 9
Lovely!
Ive had a bad day with sad faces and frowns,
I come home from school,sigh and sit down,
Then I suddenly shriek with glee
GENIE IN THE HOUSE IS ON TV!
My fave is Girlband, Adil wears a dress
And on witch way they tidy up a mess
I Love Adil with bad Annabell Scott
She only loved Adil from greed and rot
Now this rap has to end
but it'll make my broken heart mend!
geniegirl - age 9
Very good rhymes, GG! Nice story!
I have a mate who is a genie,
if you say he's a meanie,
he will turn you into a beanie.
so don't take the mick,
his name's not nick,
his name's adil, and he don't take no pill!
Rapping Ricko - age 13
Oooo! Jak has a little competition now! Although, I think Jak has the edge this once - but then he has had much more practice!
YO! I got them precious autographs
Then I walked far away
Along the cold and muddy paths
I asked James to come and stay
As we're old, we start to travel
My feet just got hurt on stoney gravel
There was a very muddy path
Me and James had a laugh
Poof the armour, great defense
Your in a fight, you need a friend
The rollercoaster was intense
And you walk away, along the bend
Oh, dear Vicky
My lovely name is Ricky
I am sophie, Im not thick
Come to me, with a stick
Emma, Sophie, Adil, Philip
you all have wacky times
A boy and a banana skin... SLIP!!!
A poem with weird rhymes
Jak - age 10
Great rhymes, Jak! I like the way they chop and change!
Adil your my one and only Love.
you came from heaven up above.
You support me with dance.
your face makes me prance.
So.............
YOUR MY ONLY LOVE!
geniegirl - age 9
Actually, Adil came from Balamkadaar...! Nice poem, GG!!
My dear Vicky,
You are my goddess.
You are a splendid beauty,
And I love you more and less!
I wanna meet you.
I got your messages.
For you I can do,
See every day your images.
I visit your website,
So well your a beautifull.
I wait our meet,
Because I'm of you so full.
Please don't forget my existence.
I will know you whole my life.
Even you are a great importance,
I wish you will be my wife!
Simon - age 14
Trés Romantique! Trés Francais!!!
the day is here
the time is near
lets get out of beddy
lets get ready
how many days until we meet
how many feet away
do you like what you see
well do thy love me
how could i have been so blind
that you could read my mind
well old chap i should go
by the way do you want to sit on my lap
amy - age 12
I like the completely non-rhyming abrupt ending! Very funny!!
Adil your eyes are so cool
like a stream of blue.
your turbans so red like...the sky ..
the song red sky at night shepards delight.
your so sweet.
sweeter than pickled onions!
you look so cuddly like a pander and i bet you are!
but all these things cant beat 3 words I LOVE YOU!
stephanie freeland - age 14
Nice thoughts. Rhymes and rhythms all over the place!!
my best friend adil
seems like he is ill,
he looks quite blue
he's been sick in the loo,
he had a little chill
but had to get a pill,
and now he is so fine he can...
do his show like man
but you guess what, i have a...
choclate bunny because he is so funny!
Annnnnnnnnna - age 9
I like it!
Nintendo Nation is the name of the location
and do what you like with keenes and motavation
Is the best place in the realm
and the setting will make you over whelmed
(Chorus)
GO GO NINTENDO! WHEN THE RAIN COMES DOWN AND YOUR REALLY SAD
AND THE BULLIES AT SCHOOL MAKE YOU FEEL BED
JUST TAKE A RIDE TO NINTENDO NATION
AND IT WIL SAVE YouR LIFE (SALVATION!)
Hi Im sonic I run dead fast
the slow people are a thing of the past
(To be continued)
Megan Clark - age 9
Nintendo Nation! Nice!!
The Genie who cries 'his words'
One time his day was stressful
His maths test was succesful
The genie's name was Adil
who cried his words & ate OAT-MEAL!!!
C'mon c'mon we have a deal
Life flies off a steering wheel
The girls want to go to a party
but get locked in by the smartie... soph!
So they climb out of the window
It turns out Philip's a wi-d-ow
One time his ruler was bent
Turned out it's what he'd lent
It's time to give his life a rhyme,
the muddled up people who play a chime
and never get their day successful
and turned out that the way was destroyed ...
turned out Adil'd been fooled,
And the child was mauled
this is the long version that's also available for download on my site
Jak - age 10
Great stuff! "child was mauled"?? Good word!!!
no two hearts more open
no two feelings more at harmony.
always belive in true love
but what if true love is leading you
up the garden path, deseption and deseat,
once a tear cried in fear.
Once a promise never broken
but if broken total destruction.
But back to those two hearts,
cause if you still have two hearts
you still have true love.
stephanie - age 14
Deception and deceit!? I hope not!
dear adil i have to say
your eyes are so blue
not dull and grey!
dear adil i could just lay
look at the sky
if i didnt see you i would just die.
also in teacher adil
you had a cool tie.
oh my oh my
i love adil
stephanie - age 14
Nice! Punctuation? ... Write a 'Love' sonnet... 14 lines. ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
On l'a trouvé dans l'obscurité,
Et il prétend être un génie.
Il rate ses sorts en beauté,
Car si longtemps est sa vie.
On a peur des punissions,
Que Mr. Philip nous impose.
Et quand Adil n'a pas de solution,
La vie n'est plus rose.
S'il révisait ses cours de magie,
On pourrait lui demander
D'exhausser nos voeux chéris.
Mais malheureusement il a beaucoup à rattraper.
C'est un génie très amusant,
Mais nous cause beaucoup d'ennuis.
Il n'est pas trés compétent,
C'est un mauvais génie!
Son nom est Adil,
Il est trés énergique.
On dirait une pile,
PrÍte à le rendre magique!
L'Adil de son nom
Exhaussant les souhaits,
N'a pas d'intuition,
Quand on le prend sur le fait!
Simon - age 14
Il n'est pas un mauvais génie! Il est un "Génial Génie!!" Bien fait, Simon. Merci!
Adil you are so fine
Adil i have little time
adil this poem could be better
out side the weathers getting wetter
adils is no violance and knows better
he flyes to balamkadaar cause hes a jet setter!
stephanie - age 14
Wetter? Better? Setter? You missed out "letter"!!
Time goes by
Very high
Babies Cry
You wonder why
Talking to the Singing Fishes
Adil thinks his life is "bonkers"
Until Philip comes and cleans dishes
Adil goes off and chucks conkers
His life is very smart
Power makes life magic
His hair is in a centre part
It gets easier by the "HOUR" (1 on L2)
Jak - age 10
Mmmm... goes a bit weird at the end!!
Adil was found in a lamp,
And it was discovered that he is a genie.
He was found in the black and the damp,
And he is full with originality.
Unfortunately he misses all his fates,
Whereas he believes that he is the best.
But he feels in shame,
And to him is posed another request.
He could better do,
If he were involved more.
And if he passed an interview,
I don't know what he would swore.
When is he born?
What did he see?
What has he sworn?
For returns himself so funny?
Simon - age 14
Very good! Write one in French for us!!
He is a famous genie,
But he is very bad.
That is so sad,
But he is very funny.
He thinks he's the best,
Obviously it's wrong.
It's a bad request,
To make a bad song!
So request a wish,
To the bad genie of its name
Is to miss this wish,
And to sink in shame.
He can to kill,
With his errors of fates.
So course more than one mile,
If you wanna pass the hell's gates.
Simon - age 14
Very good, Simon! Gets a little gothic towards the end... OoOOOooh! Scary!
Adil loves Camilla, they're Best friends for life,
If they could marry, then she'd be his wife!
She may have a hump, and sometimes be snappy,
But when they're together, they're never unhappy!
But then one day, she goes out of sight,
Adil is worried, and gets quite a fright,
He cant even live, without his best friend,
She's not just his pet, but his loving girlfriend.
Adil sits down, and starts to cry,
He cant help, the tear in his eye,
Although she is big, and smells pretty bad,
Adil cant help it, he feels really sad.
And then suddenly, Camilla appears!
Adil jumps up, and wipes his tears!
To find that Camilla had been away,
To the retreat.. for a Spa Holiday!!
Tasha - age 13
Great stuff, Tash! Really good! Rhymes are there, the rhythm is great, and the story of the poem is fantastic! I've changed all your 'their' s for 'they're' s (short for 'they are').. ok?
One day a child's bed went bonk
The woman heared apocoliptic clonk
And the bed had broke in two
The mother hit him with her shoe
Where-ever Lauren may have went
She asked the teacher why she's bent
The teacher thought what not she meant
and then Lauren moved to kent
The villagers give a big shout
The dog sniffs with a great big snout
Whatever he wants to do
The crowd, everyone shouts boo
He's a genie called Adil
The meanie genie strikes back
Look at the great big crack
and you have to chill! ADIL!
Jak - age 10
I think Adil is 'chilled' enough now... let's see: 'Adil' actually rhymes with 'wheel', 'feel', 'squeal', 'oat-meal' if you pronounce it correctly..! As oppposed to 'Adil' that rhymes with 'pill', 'chill' etc. Apocalyptic? Have you been watching Mel Gibson again? Moving to Kent? I LIKE IT!!
All of the guests of the party Cuckoo
It was the time
Where everyone tossed
Their dimes in the air
until the boss says quit
It's time for an easter party
But Sophie the big kinda smartie
won't let us go today
HEY HEY HEY!
YAP YAP YAP
the noise goes on
TAP TAP TAP
we look upon
Time is going to get worse
Being as it's going round
Philip Norton makes a curse
And he weighs 50 pounds (quite skinny)
Norton, Mr is here
@ what's his name?
The crowd must cheer
@ what's his fave type of game?
The last bloke was Mr Sodaberg
Wish upon an iceberg
My dad is shouting at the cat
He hit it with a cricket bat
Jak - age 10
Poor cat!!
Adil you have a lamp you do!
you'r realy sweet did i tell you!
adil adil are you well?
What cool story has he got to tell
he lives in balamkadaar
he's travelled far realy far
there they have flying carpets r' us
all the patterns you'll get a buzz
needless so well say today
that i'm a genie love hooray hooray!XXX
stephanie freeland - age 14
I like it!
Adil is a genie he is so cool
i'm sorry to say he was pap in school
but that doesnt matter cause hes a fabulace genie!
his magic effects are anything but teeny!
adil is so cute and i love him so....I wish I wish he would always know.
He so cool he goes with da flow...
he knows everything there is to know!
ive nearly done this poem song one last thing 2 say
ADIL ROCK ON!
stephanie freeland - age 14
Fabulous!
Is he really a briant genie?
Does he really love Anabelle?
He's bad but funny!
And I think he can do well!
He looks like a teenager,
But he is 1500 years old.
He's not a good manager,
And when we see him we are cold!
So much missed fates of magic,
But so much of effort to succeed!
He is very fantastic,
And when he's embarrassed...
Emma is turbulent,
Beautiful but pretentious.
Sophie is intelligent,
Moralist and serious.
Adil is a bad genie,
Who didn't revise his courses of magic.
He is bad but funny,
Inovator and eccentric.
Simon - age 14
Fantastique! Bien fait!!
adil adil he is so fine
adil adil is not from our time..
he lives up in balamkadaar..
if your travelling there its vey far.
adil adil you are so cool
adil adil you sure do rule!
adil adil is no fool
adil adil your clothes are'nt creased
adil adil your a sexy beast!
adil adil yu are so fine
when i look at you im on cloud 9!!!
stephanie freeland
Nice sentiments, Stephanie... you will go far!
This is a rap inspired by Jak!
Hi! My name is Emma!
There's a story I wanna tell ya!
I was picking out my clothes
I said 'The red one I suppose!'
And the out of the smoke
Came this magic genie bloke!
Of course, I asked his name.
And then he went back in his lamp again!
I just sighed and picked the red Shoe
And then I picked the shirt in blue!
A.D.I.L
That was the story I wanted to tell!
YO!
Alice - age 12
Nice one! We should get Emma to read this for you!
Balamkadaar is a magical city!
there lived Adil who is terribly whitty!
over there they have lots of sand
also they have a nose flute band.
Adil is so cool and out of this place!
he has cool dance moves and a funny little face.
he has a camel names camilla but should he called "betsy".
because it would match Adil cause he's dam right SEXY!!
stephanie freeland - age 14
I like it! 'Betsy' and 'sexy'! Rock on! ('witty' not 'whitty'...)
There was young girl whose name was Sophie
She knew her tables of by heart (MOSTLY!)
She was,of course, top in school
But she still managed to be cool!
Lets all give a big cheer for SOPHIE!
Now lets talk about my friend Emma!
Now she's not exactly clever...
But she is your friend and she's always there!
Forever and ever and ever!
Now lets here it for EMMA!
Alice - age 12
8/10!!!!!!
He's by far the coolest genie!
...Thats coz he's not a meany!
He is always kind and caring,
And sometimes kindof DARING!
He concered the HUGE spider
Soon he'll be a dragon rider!
Why am I making it such a big deal?
Because this, my friends, is the mighty ADIL!!!!!!
NO LONGER THE POEM: How do you spell concered as in taking over???
Alice - age 12
'Conquered'
There was a young genie
Whose knowlage was weenie!
He didn't know a thing
but to the girls joy he could bring!
By just being there
with his lovely smile!
We love you adil
Don't you be in denial!
Alice - age 12
Thanks, Alice! I spelt 'denial' for you!!
The girls want to go to a party
they can't because they're grounded
Sophie the big kinda smarty
And the crowd goes as it's rounded
As the girls are in depression
Adil comes up and tries to cheer
the girls make a good impression
Oh Girls, what do you hear?
I don't understand, he's unchilled
maybe what he had for lunch
Maybe the clock __ makes him thrilled
But he hasn't finished his brunch
Jak - age 10
Ha Ha Ha! This is funny, Jak!! Well done! Although the last verse is a little strange...
Out of our minds
ACCESS DENIED
Oh, dear genie Adil
THERE IS A TIDE
and you just need to chill
MASTER'S VAULT
In a line
YOU SHOUT HALT
it's really fine
OUT OF OUR MINDS
we got in a fight
WHATEVER EMMA FINDS
she's always so too tight
YOU NEED A FRIEND
who always helps you
IT IS THE TREND
so buy the new shoe
THERE'S A RAPPING GENIUS WHO'S IN TOWN
he looks at me and...
GIVES ME THE FROWN
and I climbed on his hand
I TOLD HIM TO STOP
he frowned at me
HE DRANK ALL THE POP
I looked at the tree
TROUBLESOME STORY
what a day?
NEED THE GLORY?
the month is May
DRIVING THE CAR
Sorry I'm too slow
I DIDN'T GO FAR
they told me to go
Jak - age 10
I like the rhymes, but, again, a lot of it is meaningless! "He drank all the pop, I looked at the tree" ????
Adil Adil
sunny Adil
he is a genie and always will..
get his wish wrong but thats ok..
he'll have a go another day....
Adil is so funny
adil is so bright...
he can light up the day and light up the night...
on this site..some people love him soon everyone will...cause i do!!!!!!!
ADIL ADIL
stephanie freeland - age 14
Rhythm goes a little bit bonkers on this one, Stephanie!
Where I always used to hide
the magic world used to scare me (B)
And when Im on the beach, a lazy tide
A magic time was like I could imagine (B)
he being a brat in legacy
It was a time of magical tales
I could just see them in my mind
All the sinking whales
I got poisoned by the bind
Lots of tales hit the earth
fell in a pit
made child birth
it was like the world was hit
Time to time
............
time to time
............
Some time to walk
It was scaring
When I saw a hawk
and he was bearing
Jak - age 10
And this one? Careful, Jak! Make sure you know what you want to say to us!!
Adil's a genie who grants cool wishes
he cunjures up some singing fishes.
He does have a flying carpet rug,
He is so kind he is no thug
1..2..3 adil with me.
near and far
so off we go to balamkadaar.
Stephanie - age 14
Fab!
Emma makes a silly wish
(once again) she always does
It's about the goldfish
And why did dad make all the fuss?
Adil is my gullable genie
He really likes to fix
whatever is a meanie
and he eats the only twix
Who can forgive Adil?
Probably No-One!
Why does he eat the pills?
Because he likes the buns
He thinks squares are circles
He links circles to squares
He thinks that time goes flying
He links the chime, kept on applying
Jak - age 10
Oh dear... the pills are back. But at least we get a Twix!! Like it!! Really like 'does' rhyming with 'fuss'! Great!!
I want to play a trick,
my mum seems quite mad,
I don't know what sweets to pick,
she said I was being bad
(Non Rhyme)
She stamped on me with boots ,
They're massive, they're big,
and I said ouch you look like Simon,
Mum: What? Cowell?
They were so expensive,
I wanted to punch my mum,
Oh, she was so aggressive,
that time was so much fun
Dressing up as a pirate,
It's real time,
I really was imaginate,
It's like playing a chime
I wish I had a genie (Non Rhyme),
Who swished the dishes,
and fed the fishes,
who was quite a meanie
(Half Rhyme)
It was time to time forever,
Until my mum gave me toy bull,
and I was like... whatever,
She told me I was ?hull?
It was time (Non Rhyme),
to play a chime
She took away my Nintendo DS,
She squeezed my face,
I would confess,
Until she walked away a pace,
It was all a sunny day,
when all I wanted to do was chill,
I wanted... go out and play,
when all I wanted is to eat Adil
She got the 40 thieves on me,
Life is like another time,
She chucked me up a tree,
Oh, like playing the chime
Jak - age 10
Nice to see that there were no 'pills' in this one!
Emma has asked Adil for a wish,
that doesn't involve a singing goldfish,
remote controls that can pause and erase,
all she wants is a trip out to space.
Thankfuly, he ges it right,
and pop they vanish out of sight,
racing towards Venus and Mars,
meteorites and shooting stars.
Who knows what they will see,
way out in the Galaxy,
just think they'l be there soon,
they might even meet the man on the moon!
Up + Up their rocket flies,
heading up, towards the skies,
they no they cant go out of doors,
while poor sophie is doing the chores!
Playing with the satilites,
racing past the northern lights,
they'll maybe even say hello,
to ailens the flash and glow!
TashX - age 13
Very good!! I love the rhymes "erase" and "space"!!!
Theres a genie in the house,
Who is bigger than a mouse.
Adil is his name,
Magic is his game.
His tricks keep going wrong!
Sometimes instead of a song,
He makes a pong!
Emma - age 7
Ha Ha! Very funny, Emma!
The Ice Skating Adil, it's his first time
(A)He's skating
(B)never seen that ice
(A)he's shaking
(B)because of all the mice
(A)he's making
(C)a riot
(A)he's waking
(C)be quiet
(D)His name's Adil
(E)the gullable genie
(D)he needs to chill
(E)and be a meanie
(F)Frank is all by my side
(G)for all the dance
(F)he is so wide
(G)his middle name is Lance
Au Revoir
(H)all you may say
(I)play on the mat
(H)it's a happy day
(I)scare the cat
Bonjour Menne
(J)The genie plays payday
(K)It is their time
(J)the time is Mayday
(K)he likes to play that chime
Jak - age 10
You are really getting the hang of this now, aren't you? Make sure you stay focused, though, on what the poem is about!! Let's lose the cats and the mats!!!
He's a genie
His name's Adil
He is a meanie
he needs to chill
Time goes by
it swishes fast
you wonder why
you finish last
He has to chill
he likes the paper
he pays the bill
he comes home later
Jak - age 10
Very good! Usually, the rhymes are at the end of the lines. I'm not asking you to have rhymes anywhere else... yet!!
Oh gullable genie,
We need Adil,
he is a meanie,
he just needs to chill
His name is Abdab,
we call him tramp,
he is very bad,
he wants that lamp
Your turban on too tight?
your name's adil,
you wanna fight,
you like fish gills
Jak - age 10
Great stuff!!
He's bothered by the apple peal
He's hanging on the steering wheel
He's bragging about all his money
And that sounds quite funny
Adil from afar, Bashful Genie
He is also... Quite Weanie
He just needs to chill
So go pay the bill
He's who?
Looked in his shoe (???)
Wonder what was going wrong?
Even though it was the thunder!
Jak - age 10
Getting there, Jak! Getting there!!!! Good stuff! You've now written AABB... write one verse: ABAB! I KNOW YOU CAN DO IT!!!!
Poor Adil is stuck in his lamp,
with no one around, he sits in the damp,
unhappy and lonely he sits there alone,
with nothing to do until someone comes home!
His power is dead, and the lights are dim,
theres nothing to do that can occupy him!
all he finds is an old pair of socks,
old pantaloons and a cardboard box.
Inside the box, he finds lots of things,
An old telephone and some Fairy wings,
Textbooks, pencils, paper and pens,
little plastic dollies, like Lindy's and Len's
While searching again in the back of his house,
he finds nothing else but a torch and a mouse,
he picks up the torch and puts it to use,
to write Tash a letter, for he's a recluse!
TashX - age 13
Wow! We are not worthy! We are not worthy! xxx
he's just catching (A)
what is hatching (B)
he's just matching (A)
what he's batching (B)
his name's adil (A)
he eats the pills (B)
he likes to chill (A)
and always gets thrilled (B)
looking at the cinema screen (A)
dancing to the mr bean (B)
sophie emma make silly wishes (A)
but we always wonder why time swishes (B)
look what you've done now (A)
you all go wow wow (B)
too chicken to give it a try? (A)
why, why, why? (B)
it's clickin' (A)
was that better?
Jak - age 10
Well... 'catching', 'hatching', 'matching' and 'batching' all rhyme so they are all (A) and then 'adil', 'pills', 'chill' and 'thrill' all rhyme so they are all (B) so you have actually written AAAA BBBB. We want ABAB ABAB CDCD CDCD! Do you see? Tash below has written AABB CCAA BBDD. See?
Camilla the Camel has gone far away,
to the land of Egyptains for a nice holiday,
Of sunbathing, tanning on an expensive retreat,
Grains, Wheat and Oats are just somethings to eat!
But Camilla the Camel is certainly wrong,
For in the retreat she doesn't belong,
She's in for a "holiday" of working all day,
and not only once, but from April to May!
Working nonstop in the soaring heat,
so much to do, and little to eat,
Looking forward to a nice warm meal,
going home, and seeing Adil!
TashX - age 13
FANTASTIC!!! FANTASTIC!! WELL DONE! I LOOOVEEE IT!!!!
who wears a turban?
no other than adil
who eats the pils
always does the kill
he likes to chill
and have a thrilling time
at the party he got himself to
Adil
where's the pills?
you ate them again
did you?
<*BURPS PILLS*>
Sorry Mr Philip
your name is Dil
you hate to chill
his name is Max
try make the cracks
use twenty packs of beans
he does know what that means
Philip always gets you in trouble,
Trouble
make it double,
Philip always gets you in trouble,
Trouble
make it double
Mars, Jupiter, Venus, Neptune, Pluto, Earth, Sun, Mercury, Saturn
Adil, what's happened to Saturn?
did you give it a pattern?
who learns the latter
with lots of patter
Jak - age 10
Not bad! Your rapping is great! Next time, I want you to write a poem which rhymes like this:
ABAB ABAB CDCD CDCD. Four verses. Each letter represents a different rhyme. eg. ABAB would be:
My mother cut my hair (A)
Too short for me and too spikey (B)
I told her she was being unfair (A)
So she bought me some shoes - they were Nike! (B)
Read it out loud and you will see what I mean.
Adorable
Divine
Inquisetive
Lively
Smart
Ocupiing
Protection freak
Holy
Inquisetive
Esential
Esential
Merely intrested n school
Mishapping
Adorable
geniegirl - age 9
Nice! I like the way the words you have chosen really are like the characters and not just chosen because they rhyme!!
genie
wear a bikini
eat wenies
and meet a genie
Ashleigh - age 8
Great little rhymes there, Ashleigh! I wonder just how many words rhyme with 'genie'?
Frank is all by my side
Thank you Mrs Swift
Just go and shift
You have a gift
From a man called Philip
You wore a wig
Made singing fishes
Made time go swishes
And lots of kisses
from Guess Who
Anabell Scott
The fishes
The time goes swishes
and also lots of kisses
her name is Scott
look into the pot
Bringing famous musicians
Ringing all the bells
When it's not Christmas
His name's Adil
He wears a turban
He cares for the girls
And also Max too (???)
He's got bald hair
He makes a dare
----who is it? Max
She likes Bread Crust
She swishes like gust
----who is it? Caroline
He's in a rush
just like a hush
----who is it? 5 nill to Phil
He wears a turban
He cares for the bills
and also the pills
----who is it? Adil
He's a mighty genie
he's a meanie
he's weanie
and beany
------------His name's Adil
he eats all the pills
he pays all the bills
he always does the kill
he's always chilled
She has blonde hair
she makes a dare
----who is it? Emma
She has brown hair
she likes her bed
and prays with her head
----who is it? Sophie
Brown to Blonde
oh you've gone
it's round and square
OH --- I --- LOVE --- ADIL
ssssh, he's in love
he likes a dove
it's Anabell Scott
HAPPY --- 15(00)TH --- BIRTHDAY!!!
Jak - age 10
I love the idea of Max having 'bald hair' !!! In a rush, "just like a hush"? Mmmmm...
His name's Adil
he eats my pill
chokes on the wheat
he just needs to beat
the chill
the kill
the grill
Oh, my good genie
you are a weanie
your a big meanie
you have pig beanies
1. W-H-E-R-E I-S E-M-M-A?
I am Sophie
I have a sister - Emma
where is she?
she has green eyes
and great blonde hair
if you find her, please spare me
with lots of calls... oh where is she?
you fall down the hall
and WHERE IS SHE?
2. W-H-E-R-E I-S S-O-P-H-I-E?
I am Emma
I have a sister - Sophie
where is she?
she has blue eyes
and awesome brown hair
if you find her, please spare me
with lots of calls... oh where is she?
you fall down the hall
and WHERE IS SHE?
3. W-H-E-R-E I-S T-H-E B-R-E-A-D C-R-U-S-T?
I am Caroline
I love bread crust
it seems to have gone
please help me find it
he fell in a pit
he's mostly brown
he has no eyes
he's covered in white
he's full of mice
4. W-H-E-R-E I-S A-D-I-L?
I am Philip
I have a genie - Adil
he seems to be gone
please help me find him
before he grants more wishes
he has blue eyes
he has brown hair (blonde)
if you find him, please spare me
with lots of calls... oh where is he?
you fall down the hall
and WHERE IS HE?
Jak - age 10
What are "pig beanies"?! Maybe a little quality control needed now, Jak!!
There once was a boy named Adil,
And a lamp he decided to steal!
And then one day it was rubbed,
And he was loved very much,
By the whole of the whole wide world!
Alice
Alice! It's a limerick that goes wonky at the end!! "much" should rhyme with "rubbed" and "world" should rhyme with "steal"! Try it!!
M-A-C-H-O____G-R-I-L-L___T-W-I-S-T
His name's Adil
he grants your wishes
He eats the pills
he swishes in dishes
He's a bashful genie
he is quite weanie
he is a meanie
and also quite teeny
Oh Adil, stop granting the wishes
and start cleaning up the dishes
cos your name's Adil
you eat all the pills
you just need to chill
so cook with the grill
and don't use the kill
Your name's Adil
the mighty genie
never knew he was quite weanie
never thought he was a meanie
he is really very teeny
he gets ready for the keeny
in banana world
from Alle baba rocks
he has chicken pocks
he's a mighty genie
his name's adil
he eats all the pills
he just needs to chill
so cook with the grill
and don't use the kill
he's the mighty genie
his name's adil
he hates camilla breath
he hid in my shoe
oh get off the glue
you really do like to chew
Your name's Adil
get for the ball
you roll down the hall
you really are small
(sssssh) he's in love
get the covers cos it's anabel
ringing the bells as ear-rings
but you may need a second chance
it gets quite hard
when you have a bard
who wants you to pay
and you shout HEY
it does seem like a horrible day
hey hey hey
-I- -L-O-V-E- -A-D-I-L-
the singing fishes
swirling dishes
lots of hishes
time goes swishes
SOMETHING
IS
CRAZY
IN
JAKWORLD
HAHA
Jak - age 10
Fantastic, Jak! Jordan will love this! He does a funny rap voice! I'll get him to read this for you and we'll put it up here!
Oh my name's Sophiee
I have a sister - Emmae
she's a marauder for many yearse
have any of you seen her?
She's got blonde haire
she's quite fond of herselfe
she's always chillede
she's got ??? eyese
she wished it was futuree
oh ME ME ME
1: S-O-P-H-I-E
2: E-M-M-A
Oh my name's Emmae
I have a sister - Sophiee
she's a marauder for many yearse
have any of you seen her?
She's got brown haire
She's got a row with a cate
she loves her worke
she's got ??? eyese
she gives me the looke
she lost her hairband
1: S-O-P-H-I-E
2: E-M-M-A
3: P-H-I-L-I-P
Oh my name's Philipe
I have a geniee
his name is - Adile
have any of you seen him?
He wears a turbane
he's got ??? eyese
He has brown haire
his name's Adile
he has pantaloonse
-which once made a noisee
--and Emma hit him with a french sticke
---Ouch that killse
----So eat the pillS
1: S-O-P-H-I-E
2: E-M-M-A
3: P-H-I-L-I-P
4: C-A-R-O-L-I-N-E
Suspect: Caroline
Defendant: The Bread Crust Cutter
Oh my name's Carolinee
I like bread cruste
I'm Philip's helpere
Yes he DOES need help
it has brown haire
it has no eyese
it is mostly white
1: S-O-P-H-I-E
2: E-M-M-A
3: P-H-I-L-I-P
4: C-A-R-O-L-I-N-E
5: A-D-I-L
Oh my name's Adile
I am a geniee
I want my paper shreddere
just please give it backe
you massive hack
it has blue hair
it shreds the paper
see ya later
OH I LOVE ADIL!!!
Jak - age 10
Carolinee? Cruste? Philipe? Turbane? Goodee!!!
There was a girl who loves Adil
And even when she's gone she'll love him still! (thats me)
Adil is a genie from balamkadaar
he lives in a lamp and has travelled far!!!
Sophie is brainy and Loves a good book
but when emma does her homework she finds herself stuck!!!
And phillip he is a widdowed dad
and ssometimes adil drives phillip mad!
But they all love each other and a sweet as can be.
And together they make one big fammily!!!!
Stephanie - age 14
Very good! I like the rhyme "stuck" with "book" - slightly different but not too much!
His names Adil, the mighty genie
he gets through alot of trouble
so just make it double
Balanced expensive vases on his head
even though he's still in bed
coming from Balamkadaar
oh I love Adil
He wears a turban
has short hair
but you thought life is to bare
oh I love Adil
From the tip of his turban
he's hip he is
till down to the floor
and open the door
his keys got locked in
he's hip he is
He's a blizzard kid from Balamkadaar
He finds Ale baba really wappy
Reading what makes him happy
Oh i love Adil
You find alle baba really funny
you fire with guns to kill that Hitler
he's just bad, incomplete his destiny
to take over the world and give us a
--- key
Making singing fishes
Don't forget the wig
he's always using lots of figs
oh I love Adil
Not in Poem but it's stupid words:
HE CRASHED THE CAR
OH BE MUCH MORE CAREFUL
Jak - age 10
Thanks, Jak! Things getting very wacky now in JakWorld!!!
Stuck in a lamp
Banished from Balamkadaar
Adil the genie comes to stay
HEY HEY HEY
Weeny the teeny genie,
also a friend of mine,
his new nickname is Adil,
where's your pil?
Adil
Oh he's BANISHED FROM BALAMKADAAR
HE ALSO READS Genie'mon
Weany the Genie is also quite teeny
Pokegenie!!!
Jak - age 10
Yeah!
To jordan and adil
i love you
my angel is with you
while im away
my angel will stay
while im at work
she is at play
when shes away
i will say
"she has taught me my guiding way
ang i will keep her magic always"
bronwyn - age 12
Lovely. Thanks, Bronwyn.
Hi Im Adil and Im very cool
I like to play ping pong not tennis or pool
I live in a lamp with my mates
And some times(SSSHHHH!)I got a date!
Im Sophie and Im NOT thick
I got a team caled Alex Josh and Rick
Im very smart and like to read
and doing housework and good deads
Im Emma and I love to dance
and Ill date any cool boy if I get the chance
School is boring with assighnments and lessons and projects
reading and boring sessions so now you know these 3
when you grow up wich one will you be?
geniegirl - age 9
I like it!
Once upon a time, lived a gullable genie,
Found in a lamp,
You all went to camp,
His new nickname is Adil
all he needs is a pill
He just needs to chill
And wear fish gils
My name is Emma, what's my dilemma?
Just to say please, hey hey hey?
Singing Hindi Katie and Vicky?
My name is Sophie, my sis is Emma?
She's got blonde hair, I have brown!
Caroline comes to bomb the earth
Being as she has a big turf
Never knew that she could surf
and interact __ with the smirfs
Max getting bombed by Hitler
More like Arolf Miller
Angus Kennedy falling off a tree
Maybe one day his life is he __ maybe he was bombed another day :D
Jak - age 10
I love the way this poem almost writes itself, Jak! Are you learning about WW II at the moment at school? Poor Max! Getting bombed by Adolf Hitler!!!!!
Im a burgular stealing stars!
I got them from a place called Mars!
He would ask in mock surprise,
"to stick them in those sparkling eyes.
stephanie Freeland
Nice rhymes!
Adil, Adil,
where's your chill?
eat a pill?
wear fish gills
Sophie is very demanding
Her wishes are very understanding
When she makes a wish
She looks in fish dish
and she made Miss Mayer love her
Emma is chilled
Not Sophie
she's always
out of harm's way
keep in calm and stay with your...
shoes on, whos coming to meet the genie?
never thought he was quite weanie
Taking them into the future, lots of hisses and boo's...
The Anderoid Emperor, more like a penguin to me
why didn't you see?
Big Verse:
He's never been happier than the Norton House
-------------
Just use a little nous
-------------
He's a blizzard kid from Balamkadaar,
Chucking the ping pong balls go whoosh,
and every time he has more push,
-------------
Sophie and Emma, very demanding
their wishes aren't understanding
something very magic
turns into something tragic
and something turns into a trauma
-------------
Making speaking fishes
Waking Father Ted
well he's still in bed
Turning and
Churning Mrs Mayer into soup
THERE'S A GENIE IN THE HOUSE
THERE'S A GENIE IN THE HOUSE
A GENIE
A GENIE
NEVER QUITE WEANIE FOR THAT GENIE, HE'S VERY TEENY, AND HIS NEW NAME IS ADIL, OH I LOVE YOU ADIL!!!
Jak - age 10
Ha ha! How did Father Ted end up in here!
there was a genie called adil
he had his mistresses wishes to fulfil
but when they go wrong and mr. philip finds out
adil adil and the girls should be careful as mr philip might shout.
emma was a spy and sophies nose was long -
my oh my singing goldfish
adil please undo this wish
adil was found in a lamp ''in the darkness and the damp''
adil comes from very very afar -in actual fact balamkadaar.
''how can we resist theres a genie in the house''
yes - in the house!
emma
Very good! Think about the beats as well as the rhymes..
He's a gullible Genie
his name's Adil
he always eats pils
he gets quite ill
and his name is Adil
He has 2 mistresses, a master and a lamp,
don't forget the time when they all went to camp...
Sophie and Emma around the bend...
and then Adil comes and gives them a hand!
Caroline crushes an apple tree,
she's a next door neighbour and she's doing work
But you say, she's Caroline
Max is coming, coming he's coming
Max is coming, Oh I hope not
Max is coming, he's coming, coming
Max is coming, the girls hate that
Philip is proppy, he's proppy, props
Philip is proppy, FULL OF PROPS
Philip is proppy, a great designer
Philip is proppy, has a wacko boss
Cammel Sweat by Calvin Klein to eating beans and choking salsa, whatever... his name is ADIL
but he also needs to chill
and he eats alot of pills
mention the times when he gets ill
He fell out of the window... DANCE, DANCE, DANCE...
He fell into a duck pond... DANCE, DANCE, DANCE...
He's aracnaphobic... DANCE, PRANCE, DANCE,
He hid in the cupboard, and Emma frightens him with the word... SPIDER
Lots of hearts came on the screen,
He's in love with Anabel,
Ringing all the bells aloud,
just like running into hell...
Oh I LOVE ADIL
Jak - age 10
I really like the way you are using words you have found on this site and using them in your poems, Jak! - ("proppy")
Adil, Adil, GULLABLE GENIE
Never thought you are quite weanie
Coming from a stolen lamp
But did the 40 thieves stamp
On it?
Clamp your car 'cos Adils in town
Adil needs to chill
Oh very gullable genie Adil,
you got stolen from a pill,
but maybe you need to chill
once in a while
AND...
I LOVE ADIL
Jak - age 10
It just gets BETTER!!! I love the rhythms you use here!
Adil is kind hearted and very wise
he never tells tales or lies
People think hes a loon with his pantaloons
but hes the nicest of all guys!
geniegirl - age 9
Nice one!
His name's Adil
the mighty genie...
never knew he might abit weanie
because oh man he's got a pil, ADIL!!! oh gullable genie...
maybe you get the wishes wrong,
but it's time to stop at that,
he's the gullable genie and his name is Adil
Oh Adil... gullable Genie... check out abdab OH I LOVE ADIL
Jak - age 10
I can hear music when I read this, Jak! It's another RAP!!
GENIE IN THE HOUSE FOREVER: (B-Side of "Genie Lane")
Let me take you down 'cos I'm going to... The Norton's house!
Quiet as a mouse!
But loads to make wishes about...
GENIE IN THE HOUSE FOREVER!
Living was easy in the Norton's home-Before Adil was found in the attic!
I think it's crazy, ah yes, but it's so cool! It's as amazing as static!
Let me take you down 'cos I'm going to... The Norton's house!
Quiet as a mouse!
But loads to make wishes about...
GENIE IN THE HOUSE FOREVER!
Always knows Adil will wreck the wish-But I know I know it's so much fun!
Genie in the House rules-Ah yes, we should all watch! It's full of halirious puns!
Let me take you down cos I'm going to-The Norton's house!
Quiet as a mouse!
But loads to make wishes about...
GENIE IN THE HOUSE FOREVER!
GENIE IN THE HOUSE FOREVER!
GENIE IN THE HOUSE FOREVER!
Thomas - age 14
Wow! I like it! Better than your first one!!! For those of you who have never heard the original, it's here so you can sing along!!
1 Oh Girls
Girls ... Girls
Stop the making wishes
and start cleaning the dishes
as the spoon goes swishes
no your not going to that party
2 Oh Party
Party ... Party
We wish to go to a party
Sophie the big kinda smarty
Says clone us now
Not make us clowns
Oh Adil, we wish for our doubles
3 Oh Doubles
Doubles ... Doubles
Nice doubles, Adil
I wish mine was in trouble
I wish mine was cloned double
And a wish goes wrong again
4 Oh Party
Party ... Party (Again)
We wish to go to a party
Sophie the big kinda smarty
Says clone us now
And not make clowns
Oh Genie, we wish for doubles
5 Oh Adil
Adil ... Adil
Adil is here
Twisted Genie
wears a turban
has 2 ears
not qualified
I guess he's disqualified
But not make our will
to see a wacky genie
to knock over the till
Jak - age 10
Fantastic!!
Adil
just chill...
Adil
Adil
why not pay your bill?...
Adil
Name is Dil
he's wearing fish gills
Falling down and making balloons
finding pinapples go just flat
but it doesn't matter 'cos I love Adil...
Anabel in love with who?
his new nickname is Adil
coming from Balamkadaar
oh Adil, you need to chill...
Stolen lamp
in Genie School
going down the History Hall
never finding work is done
and telling your teacher to fly
when he isn't a genie so
he can't grant your wish...
Jak - age 10
Sounds like a rap, Jak!
I am Emma,
I hate Anabell-a,
She's very mean,
She stole my music,
She's mean to Emma
Oh, I'm so sad
I am Sophie,
I got a bashful sister,
she needs to clean her act,
and die her hair black,
oh emma you just need to smarten
I am Anabell,
I have bells growing out of my ears,
I hate Emma,
She's so unkind and too much chilled
I am Philip,
Girls... what did I say about magic?
and you give a silly reply
why, why, why?
I am Max, Philip Boss
Ready to fire Philip
the roof fell on his head
one day when in bed
and he is now dead
I am Caroline, Philip Helper
Help with the girls
because of Adil
I am Adil,
bashful Genie,
nearlly married,
on your birthday,
stolen from Balamkadaar,
Oh I love Adil
Jak - age 10
Thanks, Jak! Great stuff! I like the way you describe all the characters!! Make sure your rhymes happen in the same place in each verse to give it all a nice rhythm! Also, I think, by the last verse, you've given up rhyming at all!!
Have you ever met a genie who grants such mad wishes
like making dancing shoes and singing fishes?
He has dressed up as girls and made a father 9
he has sent the Nortons back in time!
He got a date that ended very sad
(He found out Annabell loved him for doing bad)
he batteled a mummmy with a GIANT pen
and made dolls come alive called Lindy and Len!
So do you know who this talented genie is?
Its non other than Adil and I love him Kiss Kiss Kiss!xx
geniegirl - age 9
Very, very, VERY good!
Once a genie lived in a sandy place,
with lots of camles sand and space!
He went in a lamp and got himself stuck,
you might think this bad but Adil was in luck!
He travled the world and granted peoples wishes,
he dressed up as a girl and he made singing fishes!
But the one place he loved dear so,
was non other than Norton household!
Megan - age 9
Wow! Fantastic!
There was once a boy,from a far away city.
Who was very very cool and terribly witty,
but his wishes go wrong
but they dont in this song,
you see I think he is a very talented genie!
Stephanie - age 14
Great! This is a limerick! A funny poem with five lines, where the first, second, and fifth lines rhyme with each other, and the third and fourth, shorter lines form a rhymed couplet!! Cool!! Although your fifth line doesn't quite rhyme... can you think of one that does? xx
adil, adil
hes doesnt need a pill,
hes not mad,
hes just bad,
adil, adil
the lovely adil,
you just need to chill,
i love you,
i love you,
and that is so true,
u should ask my friends,
they write it down with their own pens!!
Danielle - age 13
Not bad, Danielle! Send us another version and think about the way the verses are made. The second verse seems a bit rushed xx
Today I went to the Norton house
To see what all the fuss was about!
I arrived and there was a boy, 15...
When he saw me I started to scream!
He had a turban and stuff like that
which was all fine and that was that!
But... he was levitating above the floor!
Living with this man can't be a bore!
So I said to him
'How can you do that?'
And you know what he did...he gave me a grin!
Alice
This is great, Alice! The rhymes are good and the poem has a nice rhythm too!!
his name is adil
hes a genie but his ability to get wishes right is teeny
emma and sophie are his mistresses and friend.
their wishes never end.
but the girls get into trouble with their dad
and adil too the poor lad
(er... genie) mr phillip isnt really that bad.
genie in the house is the best show on tv.
im glad the show is there for all to see.
adil emma mr philip and sophie -
i love you all for ever and ever and ever.
Emma
Not bad! I like the rhymes in it!!
Once upon a time in a faraway land,
Lived a wonderfull genie who played by the sand,
He climbed in a lamp and got himself stuck,
And the lamp was then stolen, Adil
was awestruck!
He travelled the world, and over the years,
had master and mistresses up to his ears!
And then oneday, he came to a place,
Where Emma and Sophie found him in their roofspace!
They rubbed it to clean it, and got a surprise,
When out came a genie, infront of their eyes!
So Emma and Sophie got granted their wishes,
No cleaning, no washing, no chores and no dishes!
But IF a wish should EVER go wrong,
Mr Philip and Adil, can go play ping-pong!
Tash - age 13
Tash! This is a great poem! Well Done!!
Oh!
I am Emma
and I have a sister, SOPHIE
It was all ok and will be
I am hoping!
For All of a sudden
We rubbed a lamp
And out came a guy
Just like that!!!
So he told us his name!
And you know, he's not too bad!
Actually he is the best Genie
a girl could ever have!
Alice
What a surprise
Adils gone wrong
Again Again Again
We asked him just to send the sun
but he made it
rain rain rain!
Sophie and Emma
made a wish
But what a surprise its access
denied denied denied
Alice
I wrote you this poem
To tell the show to keep goin'
Coz it is the best show on nick,
But is is over quick!
So put on some more!
The show isn't a bore!
I also have a question,
Why isn't Katies audition,
tape on the site?
I am in love with Jordan
,
He does not bring me bordom!
I love the show!
Can I be on it...Erm...
Alice
There are no two hearts more open,
No one more warm and true,
You look so magical all that sparkle shines through.
You are so mysterious no one more coolio than you.
Stephanie Freeland - age 14
There once was a young boy from Hull,
Whose life was exceptionally dull.
He auditioned one day
For a part in a play,
As an actor, his life is now full!
Anthony - age 20
Sophie and Emma one day,
Went into the attic to play.
They found, in the damp,
A magical lamp,
With a Genie schoolboy, gone astray!
Well, he can't get a wish right, it's true,
But around him they'll never be blue.
As he grins like a goon
In his red pantaloons,
If they're sad, then he'll know what to do!
Anthony - age 20
Hey, I am me.
I am 1500 like me.
I am as hott as me.
I am a fit as me.
I am a Genie as me."
~I am am not really me.~
"Adil" - age 1500!
The Summer's are warm,
New babies are born.
Genie's,Genie's!
The winter's are cold,
My grandmothers old.
Genie's,Genie's!
Autumn is mild,
Like my step-mothers child.
Genie's,Genie's!
Spring is new,
So are you.
Genie's,Genie's!
Lauren - age 13
A ambivalent
D dainty
I ideal
L light
Asifa
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